I didn't even realize it was possible to destroy a shaft in putting on an arrowhead, but anyway, there's an ugly messaging error.
First person POV is fine.
Turn my arrowhead
- As you go to turn the arrowhead into the shaft, you slip and utterly destroy the shaft. Hey, at least you managed to salvage the arrowhead.
Person watching POV is bad.
K--- tries to affix his arrowhead to his shaft and ends up breaking the shaft. he disgards the fragments.
The second sentence of that description has a couple typographical errors. He should be capitalized. discards is spelled incorrectly.
~ Bill, Coyote.
"Everything we hear is an opinion, not a fact. Everything we see is a perspective, not the truth." - Marcus Aurelius
