Re: Good news! 09/16/2012 11:59 PM CDT
Love the bones. I really like the way crafting starts the bonding rate set up at first, but it takes time to get the power reward via actual use. I also like the messaging of the rolls, it seems like it will be easier to decipher. Analyze is HUGE and a great help. I honestly have very little feedback at this point because I like them so much. I might have more once predict analyze works and I can check power vs messaging, and once tangled fate works.

Couple typos.

The Sun Disk teeters on edge briefly. A gental tug through your prophetic connection tips the white side up.

Gentle instead of gental.

The Moon Sphere falls to the ground with a dull Thud, coming to stop with the top face depicting a dark cloud.

I think the comma should be in "Thud."
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Re: Good news! 09/17/2012 12:16 AM CDT
Good deal. Currently I'm hoping to have mirrors out Monday or Tuesday.

At that point I'll push the newest version (Which is mostly invisible changes but will have the typos fixed).

-Raesh

"Ever notice that B.A.'s flavor text swells in direct proportion to how much one of our characters is getting screwed?" - Brian Van Hoose
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